Remove the coma It is not right that it be there It makes the sentence square... It lacks It distracts Fling it away Toss it thus Dash it on the rocks and let it end Its days in my virtual trash box... Do it now in the name of all things holy and write A supplication to the saints of perfection A sacrifice to gods of edits So they may bless us with more chances... To mix words in a salad for lunch Hmmm dat not sounding right nuh... I ain' t'ink dat is de right metaphor... Remove the metaphor It is not right that it be there It makes the poem wrong... It lacks It distracts Fling it away Toss it thus Dash it on the rocks and let it end Its days in my virtual trash box...